Could be better...

You know, the idea was there, the direction was good, but you jsut didnt give it enough effort. I mean, sure the drawing was more detailed than most of the stuff i see here, but some movement was not very believeable, the barrel of Fat-o-soda (whatever that drink was) fell very very poorly, and the intro was very vague. perhaps a shorter intro with more actual detai will be of much improvement in the series. Also, I understood the humor, but it jsut wasn't funny. I even tried to force myself to laugh and it wasn't funny. Perhaps I just am hard to amuse... although I know other people who would also not find it funny. And one more thing: It was very very very slow. What would probably make the animation, humor, and possibly storyline better is if you speed up your fps to lets say...24, then make more gaps in between movements. The way it looked here one thing was moving into another at such rates the eventual point just got kinda lost.

If I made this look like a complete rude insult of a review, sorry. I think that if enough effort is put into the next one, it may get into the 4 zone. Good luck.

P.S. Im 14.